My writing often goes through multiple versions before I am satisfied with my finished work. Rereading my work and editing along with peer feedback is how I produce thorough and informative essays. Most commonly, feedback from my peers and instructor contains a pattern of the same things that need fixing. Some parts of my writing that usually needs more work after the first draft is the amount of evidence from the text I have included, specific language that could be replaced with better wording, some organizational reworking, and making sure my thesis is clear. I also have struggled with my grammar and punctuation in my previous writing, and original drafts. I have worked very hard to submit work with productive evidence that relates to my main idea. I have also worked on the structure of my writing and ensuring that each paragraph contains the right amount of evidence, context, and my own ideas. Additionally, feedback I have received has also included rephrasing sentences to allow my paper to read smoother. This correlates with the grammar and word choice elements as well because I sometimes find myself attempting to use big fancy words in the place of a simple word that would work much better within my writing and not create confusion. When I am able to successfully incorporate all of these elements and corrections into a polished writing piece, my writing is persuasive and fluid.