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200wrd Draft & Outline

200wrd Draft & Outline

Profile 200wrd draft/Outline 

Keeping Up Against All Odds

By Greta Jennison

Outline:

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Life story/background

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Interview/response about UNE Field Hockey journey (recruitment & career)

Motivation & Story theme: resilience, grit, hard work

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What’s next + Future plans 

Dawn DeWeese Moss of Pittsfield, Maine, had no plans of playing the sport of field hockey, especially not at the college level. But eight years, a championship ring, and a degree later, Dawn has come full circle by taking on the role of an assistant coach here at her alma mater, UNE field hockey.

“I started playing in high school because my friends convinced me, I didn’t expect to end up this good at it”, Dawn remarked. “The team needed another goalie, which looked just silly enough for me to try it.”

She grew up playing a variety of sports like lacrosse, basketball, and track to name a few, but her field hockey journey started somewhat on the later side. Dawn took to the sport and position immediately. Her very first season playing she earned the role of starting GK, overtaking the pre-existing goalie very quickly. 

“I didn’t want to play in college, but my club coach yelling at me for not trying to get recruited lit a fire in me and my mind was changed” She said.

Interview/Response section about recruitment journey and career

What was your recruitment process like?

My recruitment process was definitely different than most people because I was a 2020 senior. All the tournaments I would have normally gone to were cancelled due to Covid, so once I started emailing Coach (UNE Head Coach Danielle Collins), I had to make my own skills video because she needed to see film. Overall, it was a pretty short process because UNE was pretty much the only school I was seriously considering, and they happened to need a GK.

What was your college athletics career like?

My first season, preseason especially, was extremely rough for many reasons. NCAA college pre season is hard on its own, but add on the fact that I was the only GK as a freshman and my mom was really sick at the time, it was unbelievably brutal. I was struggling so bad during quadruple sessions of preseason that coach gave me a session off, which is saying something. From there I was on the come up and played a good bit my freshman and sophomore year, but I officially took the role of starting GK going into my junior season. More…

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Motivation & Story theme: resilience, grit, hard work

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What’s next + Future plans 

One Minute Podcast

One Minute Podcast

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This assignment was a lot more difficult than I originally expected it to be, but after lots of troubleshooting, I had success. The easy part was writing a script for myself and recording, the hardest parts were figuring out how to get the files where I wanted them to be and find a way to turn my project into a link (this was incredibly frustrating). Although I struggled a bit with technical stuff, I learned a lot and have a much better idea of what I am doing for next time!

Status Update

Status Update

I feel very good about what I have accomplished for my profile piece so far. I have over ten thoughtful interview questions ready for answering, and a good idea of the background of my subject. My next step is to begin creating an outline for the writing piece. However, I did structure the order of my questions in a somewhat organized way that I want my writing layed out. I know my subject very well so I have a central idea of her story, so a central layout for what I want to write about. I have many oppritunities to interview and have already discussed meeting times with her. I have several ideas for people within her circle to interview like possibly our coach, one of her profs, or a teammate.

Major Scavenger Hunt

Major Scavenger Hunt

  1. The communications and media arts major is part of the UNE College of Arts and Sciences. Communications and media arts majors study and learn how to communicate in today’s digital world. This major is a combination of communication skills, humanities, and the social sciences. One of the main goals is information sharing among different platforms, media, and more.
  2. Possible careers for a communications and media arts major includes a variety of jobs, allowing for tailoring to one’s interests/special skills. Positions communication and media arts majors have filled include blogger, journalist, public relations manager, marketing professional, video editor, TV studio manager, and more.
  3. UNE offers three different concentrations within the major. The three concentrations include Reporting and Public Relations, Digital video production, and sports media. There are specific courses offered for each concentration. Some courses listed for certain concentrations include sports field production (sports media), documentary video (digital video production), and public relations in the digital age (reporting and public relations), to name a few.
  4. I watched a short video on the UNE sports field production class and thought it looked super interesting. The video displayed some of the technology like cameras and phone cages that look very fun to use. It was a nice glimpse at what I will learn in that class and beyond within the sports media concentration.

QCQ Oct 21

QCQ Oct 21

Quotation:

“Man becomes really human only at the time of decision, when he exercises free will”.

Comment:

Wilkinson discusses the concept of evolution, free will, and innate human traits. He entertains a very interesting idea that humans are unique due to their ability to choose and make decisions. Many people still have doubts around Darwin’s evolutionary theory, and some even take it too far thinking that ALL traits/what happens in our lives is innate, but this simply isn’t true. We as humans have the ability to make decisions on our own, not from our biology controlling our actions, and this is extremely important to our existence. For we have adapted/survived over time, not because our bodies are built to endure any environment or obstacle, but because we as humans make choices that allow us to continue to live. Not only did we adapt to elements and create civilizations all over the world, we have continued to further the advancements of our society, by choice, not because we were forced to. For example, in early civilization it was necessary to build shelter to be protected from the elements (this was necessary for survival- not really a choice unless you want to die), and nowadays we have come so far and have advanced beyond survival, we CHOOSE to live.

Question:

At what point are advancements to our society unnecessary? Although all throughout time we have thought we are the most advanced we will get, we continue to break that record over and over, so how far is too far and what are some signs of over-advancement in our society today?

QCQ 3

QCQ 3

October 16 QCQ

Q:

“Most artists are brought to their vocation when their own nascent gifts are awakened by the work of a master. That is to say, most artists are converted to art by art itself.”

I chose this quote because I think it very much aligns with author Jonathan Lethem’s main points in “Ecstasy of Influence”. In this quote, he is explaining how most artists begin creating or discover their creative talents due to being inspired by “the work of a master”, which can be any piece of art. I also like how the last part ties in how artists are “converted”, which is a very interesting word to use because it implies some sort of change, which is something that art can create.

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I feel very personally connected to his idea of inspiration from other artists being the thing that sparks people to begin, or go back to creating. I have always loved art and grew up a very crafty person, but it has been very hard keeping up with that part of myself while at school because I am so busy. However, last fall embroidered sweatshirts started trending, and it inspired me to embroider a sweatshirt of my own. After this project, I continued creating and embroidering for a few weeks, and whenever I am brought back to the art of creation, I am reminded how much it means to me.

Q:

If all art that is created is influenced or inspired by art that came before it, where is the line of originality drawn, and how can we differentiate between inspiration and plagiarism?

2-1-Q oct 14

2-1-Q oct 14

Greta Jennison

13 October 2025

2 Comments:

  • On page 170, the panel in the bottom left corner shows the tragic death of George’s aunt and cousin who did not survive the bombing of Hiroshima. In this part of the book, the Takei family received a letter from relatives in Japan signifying that George’s Grandmother and Grandfather were still alive, but weeks later they received another letter explaining that their aunt and cousin sadly were not. The panel shows a vague outline of bodies resting at the bottom of an empty canal, and the text explains that their bodies caught on fire and they jumped into the canal to extinguish the fire, but tragically perished anyways. This panel is extremely powerful and exposes the sad truth about the amount of Japanese civilians who were killed in the bombing of Hiroshima.
  • On page 177, George is now all grown up and working as an actor in the musical “Fly Blackbird!” that ran for over a year and was hired to perform songs before civil rights rallies, most notably they performed before the speaker Reverend Dr Martin Luther King Jr. George was extremely moved by his speech and had the opportunity to meet him afterwards. The art in the panel that shows George meeting MLK Jr stood out to me because of the way the artist highlighted them shaking hands. Most of the panel is pretty darkly shaded, but there is a circle of highlighted light around the touching hands of the two men, signifying how much this meant to George and how magical it was.

1 Extension:

The Japanese city of Hiroshima was bombed on August 6th, 1945 at approximately 8:15am. The atomic bomb nicknamed “little boy” was dropped by a b-29 bomber by the name of Enola Gay. Over 70,000 people were killed instantly and thousands more lives were claimed by the shock wave and firestorm that engulfed the city after the initial explosion. This was the first use of atomic weapons in wartime and it created great fear and devastation, but was invented as a threat to end all wars. I read a very interesting letter from a pilot of the B-29 bomber to his son, explaining the extreme significance of his mission. In the letter he explains the reasons for the attack, and that the end goal of the bombing is to end all war. One sentence in particular that stood out to me was when he talks about how we no longer need to use a bunch of planes in a bombing, for “A single plane…can wipe out a city”/ 

1 Question:

How quickly did the news spread to Japanese Americans about the bombing? Were Japanese Americans still treated as “the enemy” even after America attacked Japan?

https://visit.archives.gov/whats-on/explore-exhibits/atomic-bombing-hiroshima-and-nagasaki

2-1-Q oct 7

2-1-Q oct 7

Greta Jennison

6 October 2025

2 Comments:

  • On page 146, Takei introduces a man named Herbert Nicholson who devoted so much of his time to bringing books and other goods to the camps. Herbert would visit the camps and bring books and other supplies that people needed. He even brought one of the camp residents’ dog to the vet when it was sick. I love how the art in the panels that feature this heartwarming gesture feels soft and creates a feeling of safety.
  • On page 149, we learn about public law 78-405. Public law 78-405 was a twisted policy that essentially gave Japanese americans the “right” to renounce their status as an american citizen, and accept the identity of alien enemy. This was the american government’s solution or almost like a snarky response to the “no-nos” (people who answered no on any question of the loyalty questionnaire).

1 Extension:

  • Herbert Nicholson
  • 1892-1983 
  • Born in Rochester, NY
  • Well known advocate for Japanese Americans
  • Learned to speak Japanese Fluently
  • Converted West Los Angeles Methodist church into a warehouse for supplies for the camps
  • Did all this work while sacrificing his life/money (slept on train rides to avoid hotel bills)
  • Was only allowed to bring into the camp what he could carry
  • Put over 50,000 miles on his Dodge truck transporting supplies
  • Delivered books, peoples belongings, pets, ashes of a loved one, and even dug up buried treasure

1 Question:

Why did Nicholson care so deeply about these strangers, and what did he get out of all this, if anything?

https://encyclopedia.densho.org/Herbert_Nicholson

2-1-Q sep 30

2-1-Q sep 30

Greta Jennison

6 October 2025

2 Comments:

  • Page 136 has a very interesting artistic design that helps explain what is going on in the story. In a moment of tension, two men from the camp face off, one asking “what did you call me?”. The art in this panel stood out to me because there is a dark shaded background and lots of harsh line patterns overlaying on the people in the panel, creating a feeling of tension and emotion.
  • On page 114, everyone in the camp is forced to take a “loyalty questionnaire” to prove their loyalty to the country. There were questions that accused these American born people of siding with the Japanese empire. I thought it was super interesting that on the next page there is a sort of comparison/list explaining his parents backgrounds and identities, it was super helpful to have a refresh on the history of his parents and was also helpful to moving the plot along.

1 Extension: 

People who answered no to any question on the questionnaire were immediately seen as disloyal and were sent to the Tule Lake internment camp in northern California. Tule lake was the largest camp and was in operation from 1942-1946. At its max capacity it held around 18,000 wrongfully incarcerated people, almost half being children (as Takei mentions). The camp had a high school, hospital, factories, a cemetery, and more. This camp was also heavily guarded with machine guns and surrounded by 3x the amount of barbed wire as other camps. Tule lake was also widely known for its segregation center with its own jail.

1 Question:

Were there any parents who answered no to the questions, but their adult son answered yes and was drafted? If so, what kind of effect did that have on their parents who were whisked away to the “disloyalty” camps?

https://www.nps.gov/places/tule-lake.htm

My Relationship with Sports Pre-Profile & Presentation Reflection

My Relationship with Sports Pre-Profile & Presentation Reflection

Peer Essay First Impressions

I think this essay tells a great and thoroughly complex story that I relate to as well. I really like the detail that was added and the storytelling-like flow, it does a good job at painting a basic picture of his life story (or sports life story). Additionally, it was great that he related what he learned through sports (football) to real life. It is certainly true that sports can teach many important life lessons and skills and he highlights this well in his essay. I relate to the part about getting to college or going through the recruiting process and having that realization that so many people are talented because it is a shocking change coming into college athletics from high school. 

Interview Questions:

What was your recruitment process like? 

What kept you going, and keeps you going, when it gets hard mentally?

What books did you read to better yourself?

How do you anticipate your sports relationship to continue?

How has what you have learned about yourself and your relationship with sports from UNE football help you in your future endeavors? 

What are your favorite teams?

Did you continue the same position in college or did it change?

How did you adjust to the rigor of college football?

Did you have any “almost quit” moments?

If you want to have kids, will you put them in sports?

Do you think having a relationship with sports is an important factor in life? 

Do you have a specific play from college or earlier that you will remember for the rest of your life?

Presentation Outline:

Casey Jordan 

Hometown & Highschool Highlights:

  • Grafton, Massachusetts, Grafton High school
  • Made it to championship Senior year, played at Gillette Stadium, lost game but learned lessons of resilience and teamwork
  • Originally a quarterback for first two years of college, later switched to tight end embraced the challenge and growth
  • Recruitment process: considered not playing in college, had multiple d3 in northeast interested, was intimidated by the challenge
  • Grew up a fan of Boston sports teams (Patriots)

Current Endeavors & Accomplishments:

  • member of UNE football team
  • Successfully transitioned from QB to TE
  • Learned to adapt to challenges of college football and academics
  • Uses the discipline, adaptability, and mental focus learned from football in daily life

Mindset & Motivation:

  • Believes sports are more of a mental challenge than a physical one
  • Keeps a positive mindset (thinks positive thoughts)
  • Believes that success is worth the struggle 
  • Move forward and don’t dwell on mistakes
  • Reads sports psychology books:
    -“Don’t believe everything you think”

Goals & Aspirations:

  • Finish last two years of UNE football
  • Graduate with degree in communications
  • Hopes to work in sports/possibly ESPN
  • Plans to maintain a lifelong relationship with sports (going to gym and continuing challenging himself)
  • put his future kids in sports because of the valuable life lessons it teaches

Project Reflection:

I think I am pretty satisfied with my project, but there are several things I would do differently if I were to do it again. I enjoyed having an actual subject to interview, rather than having to research something on my computer, and it was nice to actually be able to ask the exact questions that I wanted the answers to. On the positive side, I think my presentation was well organized, aesthetically pleasing, and I did well presenting it (confidence, audience eye contact, use of notecards, not relying on my slides). Things I would change if I did this project over would include delving a bit deeper and forming more of a cohesive story rather than just a factual slide presentation. I did well getting the information out, I think I just struggled with connecting it to create a whole story. Additionally, even though I rehearsed thoroughly, I fell victim to nerves and ended up rambling/going off script a little bit because I thought I was under time due to rushing a bit because of nerves. Overall, I did enjoy this project and found it fun to make one of my classmates look like an NFL player. Lastly, it was actually super cool to hear other people’s sports stories and I discovered some similarities between my life experiences and others that I never thought I would relate to. From traumatic coaches, to sports anxiety, to crazy sports connections, it was super interesting to learn the more vulnerable and hidden sides of my classmates.

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